New Pleo backup story!

[Allosaurus]

First, let me get it up.
AH, here!

[Allosaurus]

Think back in time, way back in time, to the Jurassic period, when dinosaurs roamed the flourishing, lively planet. Back then was when the story of the Pleos started. One day, a mother Camarasaurus witnessed her eggs hatching. The eggs rolled and bumped and smashed into eachother in a frenzy. This whole batch of hatchlings had green eyes. A mile or two away, the same happened, but with yellow eyes. Each batch of hatchlings curled up as their mothers stroked them. Now, skipping forward several years, these Camarasauruses (Which were now adults) mated together and created blue-eyed Camarasauruses. Even so, some of them passed the genetic barrier and still came out green or yellow. Many generations later, there was a curse laid upon all Camarasauruses by the king beast (A cross between a Camarasaurus, an Allosaurus, and an Ornitholestes, and with all three heads!). Now, this curse was that the Camarasauruses would keep on laying eggs until they died, and the hatchlings would never quite reach adulthood, but some would survive to the age of the humans. Today, we discovered them and called them, “Pleos.” We took these magnificent creatures in as pets.

[Allosaurus]

Could SOMEONE post what they think of it? It's not completely done though. This is just the short version that sums it all up.

[pleoguy101]

I like it:) very interesting!

[Starfire]

Great start,.

[Allosaurus]

Thanks, everyone!

[fancyfont]

Terrific beginning!:)

[Allosaurus]

Thanks, everyone!

[Allosaurus]

Oops.... Double post.

ANyways, I will work on the full version soon.