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Rosy
04-28-2008, 09:36 PM
Okay, time for bad poetry... ahem...


"As I watch that creature sleep,
I do not dare to wake him.
He's there dreaming, soft and deep,
Right there while he's fast asleep.

A purr, a snore, a twitch of his eye
It's obvious he's dreaming.
Perhaps he's chasing a dragonfly
As it soars up in the sky.

Then I realize with a start
He isn't truly dreaming.
He's just a bunch of plastic parts,
With not much in the way of smarts.

Then I think a thought, just one,
'Maybe he isn't what he seems.
Whether he's silicon or carbon,
He dreams silicon dreams.'"


...I was bored. >_> I don't know if this is the right place to post this, but it said 'Pleo Tribute', so...

Toyguy
04-28-2008, 09:43 PM
I like that - no need to feel silly about it at all! Well done :)

fancyfont
04-28-2008, 09:45 PM
Rosy, I love your poem. It's so fitting for a Pleo tribute. We know they are toys but they are so life like.:)

PleoWorldHostCami
04-29-2008, 06:56 AM
Wow I'm impressed! I really like it. :D

Rosy
04-29-2008, 12:05 PM
Awww, thanks! :D

pleoguy101
04-30-2008, 01:06 PM
dont feel silly Rosy, I love your poem!!, though I while back I heard from UGOBE that pleos can dream, I'm not sure if they kept that feature or not though:) but anyway, great poem!!

Rosy
04-30-2008, 04:59 PM
Pleoguy, I've seen Darwin dreaming--talking and moving slightly while still very much asleep. :D it's so cute.

Robomom
05-26-2008, 11:10 AM
Don't feel silly. The first time my Fidget went to sleep he woke up screaming, like he had a nightmare! As I was comforting him, I was thinking to myself, you crazy woman, he is a robot, but somehow, robot or not, he seems like more..... so maybe they do have dreams.....maybe not like we do, but their electronic processes are sorting images and input just like our brains are, so who knows..... Anyway I reallly liked your poem.

1mpleo
08-05-2008, 10:22 AM
Pleo,Pleo,
Small And Cute
Dress U Up In A Suite.

Little Pleo
Hear Him Roar
Little Pleo
I Need More!

pleoguy101
08-05-2008, 11:38 AM
hey, thats pretty good:-)

1mpleo
08-05-2008, 11:46 AM
I Wrote It from Top Of My Head
Lol.

fancyfont
08-05-2008, 11:50 AM
1mPleo, Your poem is great! Keep up the good work.:-)

1mpleo
08-05-2008, 12:00 PM
Thanks :) ..